Tuesday, 24 September 2013

Detailed evaluation of my presentation

My research contributed to the presentation, as I highlighted the key words for my chosen question and went through it  and researched it looking at books or on the internet. I included the key main key concepts such as audience, narrative, genre and so forth. Moreover, I included key theories and related it to back my research and how it links in together. When I had made a point I would always refer to examples to make the statement look correct and allow the audience to understand it furthermore.

The delivery of my presentation is when I had presented it in front of the class I was really nervous, therefore I failed to make eye-contact with the audience. And as I didn't rehearse enough for my slide-show the 15 seconds went really fast therefore I found myself speaking really fast, this is a drawback as the audience may have failed to understand what I was explaining.

The topic area chosen is the representation of women in the music industry, and how has the internet impacted the representation.I am showing this by linking it to an example such as a music video. This will be negatively representing the females in the music industry and I will be giving clear examples on how the internet has strongly impacted them. With this I need to give both sides for the judgement and conclude it with my personal opinion, and I chose this topic because women have been changing over the course of time. And this links in with 'feminism' for an example. Rihanna and Adele have binary opposition as Rhianna strongly feels if she's going out with a range of guys she shouldn't be named a 'slut'. And she has strong values and opinion, she shows this through her music video strongly, this is a prime example which I used in my slideshow.

I plan to develop the presentation into an extended academic essay by doing more research on 'realistic examples' of how the internet has strongly impacted a singer. And discuss this, I have researched some music videos and have identified how the women are being represented. But I feel there can be more videos out there that strongly relate to my question, therefore I'm going to look at more videos and finally come to a conclusion which one I'm choosing and why. 

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