Tuesday 11 February 2014

Progress Report

Storyboard and Shotlist still need to be completed by both: Rajneet & Rashmi

Script is finally completed: after the storyboard and shotlist are completed we will start filming on the 16th of February.

11/2/14

Tuesday 4 February 2014

'I was here': Opening Sequence: Drama, Suspense (Final Script)

Montage - relationship 
Split Screen: wakes up put's make-up on. Close-up 
Split-screen: he's on wake-up so is she. 

Split screen 1: the girls in the bedroom waking up and looking around and is happy.

Split screen 2: Putting mascara and top eye-liner on her face

Split screen 3: having cereal and going out (extreme-close up of the keys on the door)

Time lapse of Ashwariya happy and the hills will show. This is the past: now on to the present..
Scene 1: In the forest near the hills, prosthetic make-up on her (blood on her face) She's confused and is running in the forest.  (panning shot) Music plays of (Beyonce I was here)

Scene 2: long shot, mid shot to a close-up of the protagonist. 

Scene 3: Time lapse effect of (Facebook on the phone and close-up of status, her partying with friends symbolising  she had a sociable and good life.)

Scene 4: 2nd FLashback tracking shot of the house and in the hills in the area, connoting that we're in the present now. 

Scene 5: Fading into the woods, girl running towards the boy only noticing the back of the girl. She's laughing sound: playful music. Boy and girl meet each other:
Boy: "Hi babe. Let's go for a walk".
Girl: "Okay, Let's go."
Sound: wind to show pathetic fallacy 

leave the scene by walking of and camera blurs out. DIMMING OF THE LIGHTS

Girl: roles her eyes and walks off with her phone . she's now on Facebook.

Scene 6:  He comes after her, they're both surrounded by trees. It's very dark.
Boy: he touches her face behind her hair. "You know I love you, but I don't like it when you don't listen to me babe".
Girl: she stays silent and moves a step back, and quickly moves his hand off her face and says, "don't you dare touch me!"
Boy: so your not going to listen to me?

Girl: panics and says "No!"
Boy: all this Facebook and shi* is changing you, I will make you listen to me. you bitch

Girl: "get away from me, I know what's going on you think I'm stupid? I saw the text message to that ugly bitch.

Boy: SHOUTS "what did you just say? Huh?" Slaps her 2 times

Girl: running away and keeps turning back, has dirt on her face and is really scared. Sound: intense song plays

Boy: IF YOU CAN'T BE MINE, YOU CAN'T BE ANYONE'S.
Girl: in the hills looking at the world, over-the shoulder shot (sun is setting) she cries.    

(Twist commences: cliff hanger) 



Sunday 16th February: 11-2pm


Split screen 1: the girls in the bedroom waking up and looking around and is happy. 

Split screen 2: Putting mascara and top eye-liner on her face & curling hair. People (me&Rajneet decking up ash) To show Ashwariya has high authority and is a celebrity. 


Split screen 3: having cereal and going out (extreme-close up of the keys on the door)

To show time lapse we are going to film Ashwariya in the front garden, playing with her friends, on her phone, chatting on the phone and being with family. (All going to be fast forwarded) 

Monday 17th February:

Scene 1: In the forest near the hills, prosthetic make-up on her (blood on her face) She's confused and is running in the forest.  (panning shot) Music plays of (Beyonce I was here)

Scene 2: long shot, mid shot to a close-up of the protagonist. 

Scene 3: Time lapse effect of (Facebook on the phone and close-up of status, her partying with friends symbolising  she had a sociable and good life.)

seeing how far we get, we will carry on with organizing the dates..